दिल-ए-नादान इस कश्मकश की वजह क्या है
आज जो उनसे रूबरू हुए तो
खुद से ख़फ़ा होने की वजह क्या है
जिंसे मिलानी थी निगाहें कुछ अर्से से
आज यूँ उनसे रुख़्सत होके
नज़रें चुराने की वजह क्या है
ख़ुमार-ए-ग़म में बीति थी जो हिज्र की रात
आज नज़दीक हो के भी
जुदाई का एहसास देने की वजह क्या है
कुछ लफ़्ज़ सम्भाल रखे थे जो बयाँ करते दास्ताँ-ए-दिल
आज होठों से ज़िक्र भी गवारा ना होने की वजह क्या है
महक्ती थी रूह जिनके आशियाने से जुड़ कर
आज गुलों के अन्दाज़ जो है बदले तो
गुल्शन में बहार ना आने की वजह क्या है
दिल-ए-नादान इस कश्मकश की वजह क्या है
आज जो उनसे रूबरू हुए तो
खुद से ख़फ़ा होने की वजह क्या है
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Innocent heart and the fragrance. 😅
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What about it?
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I like it.
Took me a while to read though.
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Yeah I know, I initially write in English script but switch it to Devanagari for the blog lol.
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Why though? Shouldn’t it be the other way around!?
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I find it easier to write in English script to begin with but then the feel of it is in the Devanagari haha, are you saying English would be better on the blog?
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It’s your blog, you write whatever you want to. I just said it took me time to read because the last time I read this script, I was in tenth grade. A few writers post in Devanagari here and there but they’re short. I like the essence and aesthetic so please don’t change.
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Oh yes of course, I was only asking for a suggestion, because I wasn’t too sure about it either. But yep thanks!
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This is so beautiful.
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Means a lot, thank you!
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वाह वाह बहुत ख़ूब
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बहुत शुक्रिया आपका!
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Omg..that’s so beautiful. The choice of Urdu words make it sound so mesmerizing. Absolutely loved it!💜💜
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Aw thank you, means so much to me!
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मुझे आपकी देवनागरी मे हुई poems सबसे खूबसूरत लगती है। वैह हर फिलिंग जो आप महसूस करती है, वो सबसे बेहतर इस भाषा में निखरकर आती है।
I feel the most to your love and the way you love, around these. Really liked it. 🙂
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बहुत शुक्रिया आपका, मुझे अक्सर कहा गया है हिंदी कविताएँ बेहतर हैं but I nevertheless keep trying both haha.
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वैल, आप हिन्दी मे ज्यादा fluent है when it comes to expressing.
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Maybe, thank you for the kind words.
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vaise is it just me or do you also take some time to write in Hindi?
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I’m not sure about you, but I use the transliteration thing on my phone that enables me to type in English but automatically converts to Hindi so it’s far less work haha.
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this was like the very first time i used the hindi keyboard. took me half an hour to write that.
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anyway, if you’re free sometime, do you want to play skribbl?
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Haha I remember playing that when I was younger, ah I don’t really get enough time out of these work hours and working AT home, but I’ll tell you when I do!
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i see. i found this rather recently, it’s an online game, which well can be quite fun.
and sure, can you email me and let me know, whenever? i dont use wordpress anymore.
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Why not? So you’re not writing anymore? That’s not a great news.
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no inspiration, and well, it is what it is, so yeah
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I hope you find your inspiration soon.
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probably won’t write on here anymore. just opened this today because well, you came to my mind. anyway, if you are ever free and stuff, just mail me on khayalomeinbhitum@gmail.com 🙂
ख्याल रखना। 😁
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